baby bear

Baby bear

Mum bear and baby bear were coming out of their cave. mum bear said,”  it’s  time to go  hunt for fish.Mummy bear dived into the water and baby bear climbed up on the icy mountain.He was at the top of the icy mountain and he was going to jump of the icy mountain. Then he went to the tip of the of the icy mountain.

  

When baby bear was leaning to fell for wood and fell into the water and hit his leg into  socks and drowned into the water and no one  came to save him and he got saved from his mother and mum bear went to get some fish then baby bear woke up and moved an leg.

Soon Baby Bear and Mamma Bear found that they were on a steep Cliff so Baby bear tricked mother bear so that he would jump off the steep cliff to dive to get fish but he couldn't find any food only water and there was a big tree and it was tall like a person.

Baby bear woke up and mum bear went to go and get  some fish when mum bear  came back she said are you okay  baby bear said I’m okay  but you don’t look okay I’m okay mum bear.I just last remember that  I just fell in the water  and then  I almost drowned and I did but you saved me and then hen and then when I woke up I was okay  I was worried.

To write a narrative plot plane.

I learn how To write a narrative plot  plane  on a plane.

I learn that t stands for title, o stands for Orientation, p stands for Problem,e stands for Events and s stands for Solution. And tops is for short.